Graphics under the cut.

[la_belle_laide]

It started like this:


Lips, chin, and a bit of the eyes stolen completely without shame from Kurt Cobain.



I toyed with it like this.


Boring.


Then the harvest moon rose.



ETA: Duh, almost forgot I did this.





What did I do wrong in those?

Comments

[triforcekt.livejournal.com]

The lower left side of his face, around the corner of his mouth, is a little too big in proportion to the other side. If you bring the shadow on his jawline all the way over to the underside of his mouth so that it connects with the shadow in the dent under his lower lip, it might help. I REALLY like how you treated the cheekbones and undersides of his eyes, though.

[shonagonchan.livejournal.com]

The lower left side of his face, around the corner of his mouth, is a little too big in proportion to the other side. If you bring the shadow on his jawline all the way over to the underside of his mouth so that it connects with the shadow in the dent under his lower lip, it might help.

Wow, holy crap! You're right. I erased part of the right side of his face while I was fixing it and forgot to do the left. It amazes me that I don't see these things while I'm working on them. O_o Thanks so much.

I REALLY like how you treated the cheekbones and undersides of his eyes, though.

Thank you; that's difficult for me. It's hard sometimes to get things looking correct; I forget that things have three dimensions sometimes. ;)