I got this.

I woke up at 8 this morning (courtesy of noisy crow,) and lay in bed writing auto-corrected notes on my 'droid.

I think I figured out exactly what both of these agents are telling me (especially the last one,) and what's more, how to fix it.

Still gonna need help, NGL, but I had A Moment.

REVISIONS.

This morning I woke up at 8, and chilled in bed half awake thinking about the critiques I’ve gotten from agents on my novel. All of a sudden, I had that half-awake revelation, you know the one. YES. I understand. I know exactly what I need to do to fix this. I get it. I got this.

I grabbed my ‘Droid figuring I’d try the notepad function. These are the notes I took.

So here it is, the much-needed revisions to my novel, typed on my Android at ass o’clock in the morning, half awake.



I think the most important development is great shop hit ice Beth Wtf. That's what's going to sell this novel.