ext_81053 ([identity profile] lehorin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] la_belle_laide 2006-01-04 11:42 am (UTC)

The colouring is fine. Don't keep going over the colours because thatonly makes things worse. I know whereof I speak. The hand in the corner is a little bit awkward; the fingers seem to point in the wrong direction. If the hand is dead, surely they wouldn't be curled up like that, the muscles losing all tension and all that. Just my thoughts.

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